Bnas: you had some good multis and had some interesting stuff going on as far as wordplay here. It wasn't really much of a narrative and I didn't learn much about a character or situation which was kinda disappointing, considering it's a topical. don't get me wrong, you did have some interesting stuff going on technically and with the wordplay and multis.
Eloh: this narrative was a lot more appealing to me. I felt like the rhymes flowed really well and were complex but not overly complicated. some pretty good imagery was at work here and there was a logical progression of events.
MVGT: ELOH_STACKz
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