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Unread 11-13-2013, 12:05 PM
Joe MuGGz
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 stars
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17 Won / 9 Lost
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50 Won / 16 Lost
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Dog: I personally feel like your verse was all over the place.. BUT thats not always a bad thing. When I say "All over the place" I mean you gave us some dif flavors.. first it was touching the street side.. then you took em to church.. then you applied it to you.. Nice lyrical content at times.. nice solid verse.

Obey: I see you took the story route.. which is cool.. It was an extreme story to say the least. lol.. Correct me if Im wrong,... So you was getting mugged, and then you killed the guy. That obviously wasnt enough cus you then wanted to kill the entire city.. and leave the population 0.. Stole a plane, and threw gas soaked money on the city.. then set fire to it? Ok.. So where does the topic come in at again? I know the robber was poor.. and yes he couldve been green with envy, but you didnt express that.. the people picking up the cash was greedy maybe.. opportunist even.. but not envious.

MVGT Dog
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MURDA MUZIK

Unread 11-13-2013, 12:05 PM   #5
 
Joe MuGGz
Live Battler
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.74/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
17 Won / 9 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.74/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.19/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.19/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.19/10 stars
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50 Won / 16 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
9 Won / 9 Lost
 
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Dog: I personally feel like your verse was all over the place.. BUT thats not always a bad thing. When I say "All over the place" I mean you gave us some dif flavors.. first it was touching the street side.. then you took em to church.. then you applied it to you.. Nice lyrical content at times.. nice solid verse.

Obey: I see you took the story route.. which is cool.. It was an extreme story to say the least. lol.. Correct me if Im wrong,... So you was getting mugged, and then you killed the guy. That obviously wasnt enough cus you then wanted to kill the entire city.. and leave the population 0.. Stole a plane, and threw gas soaked money on the city.. then set fire to it? Ok.. So where does the topic come in at again? I know the robber was poor.. and yes he couldve been green with envy, but you didnt express that.. the people picking up the cash was greedy maybe.. opportunist even.. but not envious.

MVGT Dog
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