Theordore: I already told u your verse was dope, i thought the rhyming was good and the concept was nice, however i felt like you could've went into more detail and you barely had no imagery if any. I thought your story was kind of cliche to begin with, but you executed it well, although i thought some of the rhymes weren't needed.
Agonize: Your verse was on point, I thought it was mad smooth, and flowed well as i read thru it. I enjoyed the picture u painted and the concept was dope. I wish I had but I've got nothing negative to say about it
Vote goes to: Agonize
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