Enfinite: I like how you set the scene, used your words to paint a full picture. Your rhymes were smooth, setups relevant, even though it got a little confusing towards the end after you introduced the plot twist. I didn't really get your "stick in the mud reference either. Solid verse though, nice drop.
Freak: I feel like you could have won this battle if you would've switched your approach. I feel like you tried so hard to drop as many rhymes in there as possible, that it took away from your story line. You didn't really address the topic at hand. I feel you though, I probably wouldn't know what to do with "Stick in the mud" either, Lol...
Vote: Enfinite
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