Logikk: Not bad here. You had a good flow and a lot of elements a topical need. I liked the way you built up the shark as hunter only to flip the script at the end. I felt the story could have been cleaned up a little but overall not bad.
Phroxen: Dope flow and rhymes throughout as has been pretty much expected of you at this point. The wizard turns you into a fish thing was a little out of left field but like EtH said, that wasn't as detracting from the verse as it would have been if the other aspects weren't so dope. This was a really fun read and therefore
My vote goes to Phroxen.
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