This was a close one for me, they were both pretty different. I felt like lock had some interesting stuff going on as far as meaning and imagery, especially in the second paragraph. But his verse seemed a bit lighter content wise. Fingerprince had a better narrative and some good imagery. You both had good vocab, I felt fingers narrative carried some weight and he had a better ending because it was a little more of a crisp conclusion.
MVGT: FingerPrince
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