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Unread 11-06-2013, 06:35 PM
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I really liked the story Mastr told but the way he told it was very basic. (Not that i could do any better but i still think it was a bit simplistic). Punks verse was really creative stylistically and i liked the story and the way he peppered in creative lines and imagery. Great job from both but i gotta give it to Punk.
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Unread 11-06-2013, 06:35 PM   #10
 
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I really liked the story Mastr told but the way he told it was very basic. (Not that i could do any better but i still think it was a bit simplistic). Punks verse was really creative stylistically and i liked the story and the way he peppered in creative lines and imagery. Great job from both but i gotta give it to Punk.
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