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Unread 11-01-2013, 08:36 PM
Sean Cron
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15 Won / 18 Lost
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263 Won / 123 Lost
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Freak MC: you had a pretty good narrative here. The rhymes were loose and flowed nicely, I felt like the strongest part was talking about after graduation day. THe partying and sex was relevant but at times some of the lines seemed unnecessary. There wasn't a lot of complex rhyme but you did a good job of creating a narrative and staying on topic for the most part.

Crysis: I appreciated how the opening multi GROUPIE NAMED CINDY, tied back into the last multis (ROOF TO THE CHIMNEY, BEAUTY WAS SKIN DEEP). I felt the use of multis was one thing you did a little better then your competitor here. You had a decent narrative, but it seemed to drift off from the topic and be repititive at points. I saw a lot of potential in your verse, but it seemed constrained, possibly something to do with the rhyme scheme.


My Winner: Freak MC

because he was a bit more free flowing and descriptive and his narrative stayed on point more
Unread 11-01-2013, 08:36 PM   #6
 
Sean Cron
Basic Member
Estimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 6.82/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
15 Won / 18 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.82/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.51/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.51/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.51/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
263 Won / 123 Lost
 
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Freak MC: you had a pretty good narrative here. The rhymes were loose and flowed nicely, I felt like the strongest part was talking about after graduation day. THe partying and sex was relevant but at times some of the lines seemed unnecessary. There wasn't a lot of complex rhyme but you did a good job of creating a narrative and staying on topic for the most part.

Crysis: I appreciated how the opening multi GROUPIE NAMED CINDY, tied back into the last multis (ROOF TO THE CHIMNEY, BEAUTY WAS SKIN DEEP). I felt the use of multis was one thing you did a little better then your competitor here. You had a decent narrative, but it seemed to drift off from the topic and be repititive at points. I saw a lot of potential in your verse, but it seemed constrained, possibly something to do with the rhyme scheme.


My Winner: Freak MC

because he was a bit more free flowing and descriptive and his narrative stayed on point more
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