I'm gonna keep my vote short.
DW- I was actually really impressed with this. Vocab, flow, structure, storyline. It was overall a great read. I also appreciated your use of vocab, which as EtH said, very few Topical heads execute it properly.

Dono- Another read I enjoyed. Same as DW, you had the flow, vocab, structure and storyline. The only part I really disconnected with is when you started naming all the different experiences known to man. I see what you were going for but that personally detached me from the story.

Seeing you both in this form excites me for the Topical GC

MVGT - DW

I'm gonna keep my vote short.
DW- I was actually really impressed with this. Vocab, flow, structure, storyline. It was overall a great read. I also appreciated your use of vocab, which as EtH said, very few Topical heads execute it properly.

Dono- Another read I enjoyed. Same as DW, you had the flow, vocab, structure and storyline. The only part I really disconnected with is when you started naming all the different experiences known to man. I see what you were going for but that personally detached me from the story.

Seeing you both in this form excites me for the Topical GC

MVGT - DW