Ok JJ: Wow. The Vocabulary And Delivery Was, Dare i Say Immaculate. Created a Great Scene and Delivered the messaged Well. There Were times Where I Was a Tad Thrown Off But For the Most part You Maintained Composure and Flowed The Entire Verse. Hats off To You My G. Im New To this Topical Thing But You're Talent is Definately Shown Here.
Sheep Lord: Honestly I had a Very hard Time Placing together the Pieces of Your Verse. I Could Tell Where You Were TRYING to Go With the Concepts But They Just Weren't Delivered Well. To Be Well in Topicals You Have to Have a Basis With Other Areas Of the 'Lyrics Arena' I Would Suggest More battles and More Elevation. But Your Efforts Are Precocious And Potential Is There To Be a Threat in the League.
My Vote: JamJar
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