[Babylon]

Dirty Work: I got really immersed in your verse, you had great, scratch that amazing rhymes which usually take away from the topic a lot but you stayed on point and I loved the whole mind/body/soul format.

Dono: Instantly liked the story, I feel as if in the beginning your rhymes kind of lacked a bit. I loved the whole "I am God" in latin spell too, then your rhymes kicked up very nicely and the story came into shape. I was really into how you explained what infinite knowledge would be like and all in all just enjoyed the verse.

My vote goes for Dono, all in all I just enjoyed his more. And his was also much longer, so there was more for me to get into.

[Babylon]

Dirty Work: I got really immersed in your verse, you had great, scratch that amazing rhymes which usually take away from the topic a lot but you stayed on point and I loved the whole mind/body/soul format.

Dono: Instantly liked the story, I feel as if in the beginning your rhymes kind of lacked a bit. I loved the whole "I am God" in latin spell too, then your rhymes kicked up very nicely and the story came into shape. I was really into how you explained what infinite knowledge would be like and all in all just enjoyed the verse.

My vote goes for Dono, all in all I just enjoyed his more. And his was also much longer, so there was more for me to get into.