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**Dysfunctional** · #2 09-20-2013, 07:24 PM

honestly? it seemed a little basic wordplay wise the punch wasn't a clean haymaker it was a nice idea just seem a bit jumbled to me. Make it thru this round wordplay the punch could've been executed way more creatively. That's all is tbh

**Dysfunctional** · 09-20-2013, 07:24 PM

honestly? it seemed a little basic wordplay wise the punch wasn't a clean haymaker it was a nice idea just seem a bit jumbled to me. Make it thru this round wordplay the punch could've been executed way more creatively. That's all is tbh

09-20-2013, 07:24 PM	#2
Dysfunctional <Classick At Rhymin> Live Battler Ranked Audio Record 3 Won / 1 Lost Ranked Text Record 47 Won / 45 Lost Join Date: Jan 2013 Voted: 14 audio / 198 text Posts: 1,028 Mentioned: 540 Post(s) Tagged: 15 Thread(s)	honestly? it seemed a little basic wordplay wise the punch wasn't a clean haymaker it was a nice idea just seem a bit jumbled to me. Make it thru this round wordplay the punch could've been executed way more creatively. That's all is tbh
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