InCizion
Your vocabulary and lyricism was great. However, Multiple times your words kind of left me hanging when it came to the topic. You left topic so many times I had to reread to make sure I didnt miss anything. Your lyrical presence here was good but you really need to stay on topic.
Dono
Your verse all around was great and well rounded. The imagery you illustrated was Very good and i cannot find any flaws with it. Your verse sucked me in gradually and you painted a great picture with your words.
MVGT Dono
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Originally Posted by Mokane
I thought denton was black this whole time he was white
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