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**The Ghost of Freak** · #3 09-03-2013, 10:08 PM

Both of these were great in different ways. I want to expo more, but sorry to be stupid, how do you vote? @EtH Also, I want to start doing more topical shiz, so hit me up boss.

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I looked at other PPV threads for voting examples, so I will vote now... @EtH

@InCizion I believe you showed your own truly unique style and great use of word play, but I believe the narrative becomes a bit convoluted and off topic due to focusing on multis in certain parts. I thought that it was lacking certain aspects of the topic picture by focusing too much on an assumed government and people that aren't in the picture. The editing was nice.

@Dono has a very clear narrative divided into stages about the one man in the picture who is fishing. He includes the river and the abandoned nature of the village all with plenty of good rhyming and word play. I feel Dono did a better job of capturing the topic. I believe Dono's use of wordplay and multis is solid, but I believe his strength is in developing a storyline making him a strong topical writer.

RESPECT TO BOTH. You guys rocked it.

My vote goes to Dono.

**The Ghost of Freak** · 09-03-2013, 10:08 PM

Both of these were great in different ways. I want to expo more, but sorry to be stupid, how do you vote? @EtH Also, I want to start doing more topical shiz, so hit me up boss.

---------- Post added at 10:08 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:43 PM ----------

I looked at other PPV threads for voting examples, so I will vote now... @EtH

@InCizion I believe you showed your own truly unique style and great use of word play, but I believe the narrative becomes a bit convoluted and off topic due to focusing on multis in certain parts. I thought that it was lacking certain aspects of the topic picture by focusing too much on an assumed government and people that aren't in the picture. The editing was nice.

@Dono has a very clear narrative divided into stages about the one man in the picture who is fishing. He includes the river and the abandoned nature of the village all with plenty of good rhyming and word play. I feel Dono did a better job of capturing the topic. I believe Dono's use of wordplay and multis is solid, but I believe his strength is in developing a storyline making him a strong topical writer.

RESPECT TO BOTH. You guys rocked it.

My vote goes to Dono.

09-03-2013, 10:08 PM	#3
The Ghost of Freak Ranked Audio Record 124 Won / 135 Lost Ranked Text Record 22 Won / 29 Lost Join Date: Oct 2011 Voted: 481 audio / 231 text Posts: 1,066 Mentioned: 560 Post(s) Tagged: 27 Thread(s)	Both of these were great in different ways. I want to expo more, but sorry to be stupid, how do you vote? @EtH Also, I want to start doing more topical shiz, so hit me up boss. ---------- Post added at 10:08 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:43 PM ---------- I looked at other PPV threads for voting examples, so I will vote now... @EtH @InCizion I believe you showed your own truly unique style and great use of word play, but I believe the narrative becomes a bit convoluted and off topic due to focusing on multis in certain parts. I thought that it was lacking certain aspects of the topic picture by focusing too much on an assumed government and people that aren't in the picture. The editing was nice. @Dono has a very clear narrative divided into stages about the one man in the picture who is fishing. He includes the river and the abandoned nature of the village all with plenty of good rhyming and word play. I feel Dono did a better job of capturing the topic. I believe Dono's use of wordplay and multis is solid, but I believe his strength is in developing a storyline making him a strong topical writer. RESPECT TO BOTH. You guys rocked it. My vote goes to Dono. __________________ ...and I love you too.
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