View Single Post
  #11  
Unread 08-31-2013, 02:07 PM
Lockhart
Guest
Posts: n/a
Mentioned: Post(s)
Tagged: Thread(s)
Default

I have to disagree with InCizion a little bit here because the purpose of a topical is to show the poetic side of hip-hop, so once I started reading MM's verse I was immediately drawn in to it because of how real the story seemed. It also flowed very well and it was pretty good in terms of progressing through the story. Wigsplit I felt you definitely had a more recognizable flow, but there were some instances to where wanting to stay with the flow actually hindered your developing of the story and it turned into more of just a cypher to me. I felt both had really good topicals, but I'm going with the one to where I felt he brought the story out more. My Vote: Master Mind.
Unread 08-31-2013, 02:07 PM   #11
 
Lockhart
Guest
 
Voted: 0 audio / 0 text
Posts: n/a
Mentioned: Post(s)
Tagged: Thread(s)
Default

I have to disagree with InCizion a little bit here because the purpose of a topical is to show the poetic side of hip-hop, so once I started reading MM's verse I was immediately drawn in to it because of how real the story seemed. It also flowed very well and it was pretty good in terms of progressing through the story. Wigsplit I felt you definitely had a more recognizable flow, but there were some instances to where wanting to stay with the flow actually hindered your developing of the story and it turned into more of just a cypher to me. I felt both had really good topicals, but I'm going with the one to where I felt he brought the story out more. My Vote: Master Mind.