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Unread 08-29-2013, 01:40 PM
InCizion
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Master Mind
Your flow was nice (simple) I thought you could have attacked the topic a bit more.. The story took to long to build... 25 lines is not much for a story and you needed some harder hitting situations...IMO.... Nice ending to your story....

Wigsplit

I really wish people would stop using the ////// there is no need for that anymore... as long as you format your drop right the ////// is irrelevant. As far as your drop go's... I like how you attacked the topic better than MM.... your flow was real easy to follow because of your shorter lines... it had more of a hip hop feel to it where MM was more like poetry (if that makes sense)....


Vote Wigsplit.... BOTH DROPS WERE NICE AND IT WAS A CLOSE BATTLE!!!
Unread 08-29-2013, 01:40 PM   #9
 
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Master Mind
Your flow was nice (simple) I thought you could have attacked the topic a bit more.. The story took to long to build... 25 lines is not much for a story and you needed some harder hitting situations...IMO.... Nice ending to your story....

Wigsplit

I really wish people would stop using the ////// there is no need for that anymore... as long as you format your drop right the ////// is irrelevant. As far as your drop go's... I like how you attacked the topic better than MM.... your flow was real easy to follow because of your shorter lines... it had more of a hip hop feel to it where MM was more like poetry (if that makes sense)....


Vote Wigsplit.... BOTH DROPS WERE NICE AND IT WAS A CLOSE BATTLE!!!
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