As a topical writer, my main draw is the story. I feel like Dirty work had a better overall story here, though I saw the twist coming a decent way before the actual reveal and the details could be flushed out a little better. Diss, I felt your flow and multi structure was a bit better but the story didn't have enough emotional pull to make up for the rather straightforward storyline.
Both should look into polishing their wording. Some of the phrases sound weird and some of them are obviously just there to rhyme. Keep on keepin on.
Vote to Dirty Work.
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