XK......
I don't know if crew votes count so you can disregard this vote if you think it's not fair... but XK...
I don't like how you formatted your drop at all... Formatting is huge in my opinion and really helps the writer with the flow of the piece and the reader. Your lines are super stretched (and this is comign from a person who can have some stretched lines at times)..... I liked the ending of your drop and was hopeing for a twist in the end because the first portion of your drop was a bit boring.... It rhymed well enough though... Also if you use a beat make sure you pick one without lyrics.... it's distracting when your trying to read your piece....
BloodAngel
I've never been a fan of set ups before reading the piece. IE: Call for War. 1941. I feel if the piece is discriptive enough you can get this info out... Hip Hop artists don't have that luxury of setting up a drop like this and so I judge it that way.... Your formatting was much better and your rhyme scheme was nice..... Your topic was more vivid....
Personally I think both writers should have the same topic to see how each attacks it. I think BloodAngel got the edge topic wise..... but overall I feel BloodAngel had a better piece overall.
Vote BloodAngel.. I don't DR.. if I liked XK more I would have voted for him... I have already voted against crew and that's Chloro and AC's... so it's up to you guys if you want to accept this vote...
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