Now In my opinion this one is closer in my opinion than some may think here's how I see it:
MasterMind: Your idea was ok the story telling aspect though was quite brilliant. How you explained how the person became maniacal was really well done. I would liked a different appraoch at the title though that would've been can't come up with and example at the moment but like flipping the words to make the title mean something else.
Wigsplit: You took a more unique ( structure wise) approach at this topic with the diary entry structure well done for that. You were pretty descriptive but I didn't catch much of a story in yours which is what i think makes a topical a topical. There was a story but you didnt get that deep with it you should've gone deeper.
Overall: Both did really well for what I believe to be there first topical. I'd give it high 7 to low 7.
Winner: Master Mind
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