XK: I found the story to be a bit cheesy, but thats just my opinion. The multies and flow could've been better too. But it held attention, and it had emotion to it. If that song was the topic I think u guys got cheated lol. Unexpected twist at the end, but her whispering was too much for me lol. Good attempt at the love tragedy tho.
BloodAngel: I found the story to be a history lesson. It rhymed better, but it didnt grasp attention as much, I guess cuz every war stories the same imo. But you did a good job at piecing everything together. Could've pulled some more emotion tho. Idk jus my opinion.
Mvgt: XK, I think his story was a lil more original and although he didnt rhyme as well, it held my attention more. Both did a good job tho, good battle guys.
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