Very clever interpretations. I thought that Objective had a very cool idea that worked in a lot of places, but also came up short in a few aspects. The rhyming was forced from time to time. The infinite loop finish resonated well with me because of a bad acid trip I once had.
LSR's verse was cool too but I felt the power outage opening the doors seemed a little far fetched. I can suspend disbelief though. Flow was a little choppy from time to time but it worked occasionally and when it did it was nice. Story was also pretty good.
Winner just was a little more intriguing: Objective
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