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The Law · #1 08-06-2013, 12:27 AM

Not your shit breakdowns that you see in battles. I am willing to breakdown your verses and give you feedback. There will be times i am slow getting at this.

I am going to tell you exactly like I see it. What could be worked on and the good points.

Oh and

Warning
My feedback may be harsh at times so if your one of those argue back, bitchy types don't bother because I won't feed another verse from you again if you do.

I have some rules to this also.

I will not be voting on battles
Do not post your battle links
Post your verse along with the name of the person you are battling only.
*Expo for me if you have personals.. (Not name play)... PERSONALS
16 lines is the limit of the verse
I Will not be breaking down any 32's or 64

The Law · 08-06-2013, 12:27 AM

Not your shit breakdowns that you see in battles. I am willing to breakdown your verses and give you feedback. There will be times i am slow getting at this.

I am going to tell you exactly like I see it. What could be worked on and the good points.

Oh and

Warning
My feedback may be harsh at times so if your one of those argue back, bitchy types don't bother because I won't feed another verse from you again if you do.

I have some rules to this also.

I will not be voting on battles
Do not post your battle links
Post your verse along with the name of the person you are battling only.
*Expo for me if you have personals.. (Not name play)... PERSONALS
16 lines is the limit of the verse
I Will not be breaking down any 32's or 64

08-06-2013, 12:27 AM	#1
The Law Basic Member Ranked Text Record 11 Won / 6 Lost Join Date: May 2013 Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: 340 Mentioned: 142 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s)	Real Breakdowns.. Not your shit breakdowns that you see in battles. I am willing to breakdown your verses and give you feedback. There will be times i am slow getting at this. I am going to tell you exactly like I see it. What could be worked on and the good points. Oh and Warning My feedback may be harsh at times so if your one of those argue back, bitchy types don't bother because I won't feed another verse from you again if you do. I have some rules to this also. I will not be voting on battles Do not post your battle links Post your verse along with the name of the person you are battling only. Expo for me if you have personals.. (Not name play)... PERSONALS 16 lines is the limit of the verse I Will not be breaking down any 32's or 64 Last edited by The Law; 08-18-2013 at 01:14 AM.*
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