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The Law · #**106** 07-30-2013, 07:05 PM

@Moses lol really? Your the teach so I respect it.. But if you read it, the syllable count doesn't do anything to my verse what so ever.. If I capped the 'with' Then it would have been the right syllables lol..

But the rest was on point, I know I rushed the shit, I've been mad busy lately.. Thanks for the breakdown, it's appreciated.. lol I promise I won't be as sloppy next time around.

The Law · 07-30-2013, 07:05 PM

@Moses lol really? Your the teach so I respect it.. But if you read it, the syllable count doesn't do anything to my verse what so ever.. If I capped the 'with' Then it would have been the right syllables lol..

But the rest was on point, I know I rushed the shit, I've been mad busy lately.. Thanks for the breakdown, it's appreciated.. lol I promise I won't be as sloppy next time around.

07-30-2013, 07:05 PM	#106
The Law Basic Member Ranked Text Record 11 Won / 6 Lost Join Date: May 2013 Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: 340 Mentioned: 142 Post(s) Tagged: 0 Thread(s)	@Moses lol really? Your the teach so I respect it.. But if you read it, the syllable count doesn't do anything to my verse what so ever.. If I capped the 'with' Then it would have been the right syllables lol.. But the rest was on point, I know I rushed the shit, I've been mad busy lately.. Thanks for the breakdown, it's appreciated.. lol I promise I won't be as sloppy next time around.
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