Originally Posted by Moses

Week 1 Grades

1.@Xplissit-
2.@Dissizit-76%
3.@cakedout-60%
4.@The Art of War-73%
5.@Agonize-72%
6.@Black Book-69%
7.@Snoopy316-52%
8.@Manhattan- 75%
9.@JimmyDean-80% + (5) = 85%
10.@prospektJS
11.@XplicitKontent
12.@Fidel Z
13.@The Law-67%
14.@TiG-Z- See me after class... 33%
15.@Violent Scripture- 59%

Week One Bar of the week

This weeks Bar of the week goes to @JimmyDean

If you notice the build was relevant, he also had a decent punch leading into the final punch and followed the rules... The use of multis is almost at heavyweight level aswell , there were hardly any gaps inbetween multi sets without relevant multis

I prolly 'Got him sweating' like he BEEN in A FURNACE- Cuz if I find out he had inTENSIOns TA FLIRT WITH my CHICK, on HER WORK SHIFT. Then Clips'll meet this geek, just to 'sweep him off his feet' like this KID was OBSERVIN a TRICK that WAS GORGEOUS!



*Also I dont see anyone else taking the time for a class so I would appreciate you all being patient with the breakdowns this is alot of work, I'm doing music, audio topicals, work, and LIFE, while breaking down 10-15 members bars. The grades are in, the breakdowns will be in FULL I am done with half of them, dont worry about that, this is alot of work though being that you all are at different levels and have diff. things to work on, I will be posting the full breakdowns in here in the morning. Week 2 will start after the breakdowns have been dropped and we discuss what it is we can improve on as a whole. No need to rush perfection, feel free to discuss what you feel eachother can work on and help eachother , this is a learning enviornment, the bulk of you could start by looking at the bar of the week and taking a page out of his book with the multis, structure, the bar wasnt the best punch , but he used the topic, multis, and structure to create a very solid bar.

Dont fret over the scores, they are judged from 1-10 10 being heavyweight and damn near perfect. I was prob a lil generous tbh but I dont see the need to be overly critical

---------- Post added at 04:24 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:21 PM ----------

[/COLOR]I will be working with some of you via PM , because we have alot of work to do.

@Moses you didn't get back to me. Can I hop in? Promise I'll be a perfect student

Originally Posted by Moses

Week 1 Grades

1.@Xplissit-
2.@Dissizit-76%
3.@cakedout-60%
4.@The Art of War-73%
5.@Agonize-72%
6.@Black Book-69%
7.@Snoopy316-52%
8.@Manhattan- 75%
9.@JimmyDean-80% + (5) = 85%
10.@prospektJS
11.@XplicitKontent
12.@Fidel Z
13.@The Law-67%
14.@TiG-Z- See me after class... 33%
15.@Violent Scripture- 59%

Week One Bar of the week

This weeks Bar of the week goes to @JimmyDean

If you notice the build was relevant, he also had a decent punch leading into the final punch and followed the rules... The use of multis is almost at heavyweight level aswell , there were hardly any gaps inbetween multi sets without relevant multis

I prolly 'Got him sweating' like he BEEN in A FURNACE- Cuz if I find out he had inTENSIOns TA FLIRT WITH my CHICK, on HER WORK SHIFT. Then Clips'll meet this geek, just to 'sweep him off his feet' like this KID was OBSERVIN a TRICK that WAS GORGEOUS!



*Also I dont see anyone else taking the time for a class so I would appreciate you all being patient with the breakdowns this is alot of work, I'm doing music, audio topicals, work, and LIFE, while breaking down 10-15 members bars. The grades are in, the breakdowns will be in FULL I am done with half of them, dont worry about that, this is alot of work though being that you all are at different levels and have diff. things to work on, I will be posting the full breakdowns in here in the morning. Week 2 will start after the breakdowns have been dropped and we discuss what it is we can improve on as a whole. No need to rush perfection, feel free to discuss what you feel eachother can work on and help eachother , this is a learning enviornment, the bulk of you could start by looking at the bar of the week and taking a page out of his book with the multis, structure, the bar wasnt the best punch , but he used the topic, multis, and structure to create a very solid bar.

Dont fret over the scores, they are judged from 1-10 10 being heavyweight and damn near perfect. I was prob a lil generous tbh but I dont see the need to be overly critical

---------- Post added at 04:24 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:21 PM ----------

[/COLOR]I will be working with some of you via PM , because we have alot of work to do.

@Moses you didn't get back to me. Can I hop in? Promise I'll be a perfect student