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Unread 06-23-2013, 09:39 AM
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"BOLDLY BEATING WEAK DROPS??"

Example of the wording. It reads like you were racking your brains to make the multi's match and to keep it relivant. The wording isn't as natural as it needs to be. Plus it's typical "L.B Wording"
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I'm part German myself.

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Unread 06-23-2013, 09:39 AM   #13
 
J u s T C J u s T C is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
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"BOLDLY BEATING WEAK DROPS??"

Example of the wording. It reads like you were racking your brains to make the multi's match and to keep it relivant. The wording isn't as natural as it needs to be. Plus it's typical "L.B Wording"
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I'm part German myself.

Fuck off, I got work to do.
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