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**OSKAR** · #4 06-08-2013, 06:40 PM

1)beats to loud...it's hard to make out what u are saying.

2) Flow's still iffy at points and it sucks to see that u still have quality issues.

All and all I see lyrical content in there..but u need to polish the flow a bit and ur mixing..

Keep em comin

**OSKAR** · 06-08-2013, 06:40 PM

1)beats to loud...it's hard to make out what u are saying.

2) Flow's still iffy at points and it sucks to see that u still have quality issues.

All and all I see lyrical content in there..but u need to polish the flow a bit and ur mixing..

Keep em comin

06-08-2013, 06:40 PM	#4
OSKAR <Classick At Rhymin> Ranked Audio Record 23 Won / 7 Lost Ranked Text Record 4 Won / 5 Lost Join Date: May 2010 Voted: 108 audio / 116 text Posts: 2,188 Mentioned: 1070 Post(s) Tagged: 31 Thread(s)	1)beats to loud...it's hard to make out what u are saying. 2) Flow's still iffy at points and it sucks to see that u still have quality issues. All and all I see lyrical content in there..but u need to polish the flow a bit and ur mixing.. Keep em comin
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