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05-26-2013, 09:10 PM
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Not bad. Wording was a little off in places, and the syllable count was fairly off in a lot of places. The meaning however, and the story, were quite good. Good piece right here.
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Not bad. Wording was a little off in places, and the syllable count was fairly off in a lot of places. The meaning however, and the story, were quite good. Good piece right here.
Lockhart