I'm not bitching about the syllables. I realize that it was all 4 syllables. And I was just doing random syllables above... But the schemes need to be dope. Something that makes sense and paints a picture by itself. And you need to take into account how many possibilities there are to create rhymes with them. You got to avoid dead ending sounds that don't have many rhymes or people will stretch the fuck out of pronunciation. Like the word "off". If you stay true to the scheme, that shit is impossible. Instead of having 4 syllables rhyme, you have 3 syllables rhyming with one just being a filler spot basically. Nah mean?
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