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**RULE** · #9 03-12-2013, 06:45 AM

first thing i notice is your presentation is terrible.

wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS!

How are people supposed to read that smoothly? Too many brackets and swiggles n shit.

The lines a mess.

**RULE** · 03-12-2013, 06:45 AM

first thing i notice is your presentation is terrible.

wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS!

How are people supposed to read that smoothly? Too many brackets and swiggles n shit.

The lines a mess.

03-12-2013, 06:45 AM	#9
RULE <Classick At Rhymin> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Rookie Champion Tag Team Champion Ranked Audio Record 32 Won / 5 Lost Exclusive Audio Record 3 Won / 1 Lost Ranked Text Record 187 Won / 34 Lost Exclusive Text Record 11 Won / 5 Lost Join Date: Aug 2009 Voted: 241 audio / 1980 text Posts: 28,186 Mentioned: 3435 Post(s) Tagged: 69 Thread(s)	first thing i notice is your presentation is terrible. wit(Cs"ock)in her face" is just STALIN DEFENSES cuz ima "Leave (Ls)"in"{A~LL)OF YA BUSINESS! How are people supposed to read that smoothly? Too many brackets and swiggles n shit. The lines a mess.
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