100 ..theres all kinds of uncomfortable pauses... stretched bars... maybe thats more like it... not so much off beat, but your bars are stretched on multiple occassions , atleast 15 times throughout the track, which messes up your flow which in turn makes it sound off beat... do you write to the beat? please tell me you dont.....
moral of the story... stop stretching your bars... you come across as a textcee bars were good but the flow was choppy in alot of places due to the stretched bars...
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Ive been trying to find a way to explain to you the "off beat" ish ive been saying, but its not really off beat, youre still slick on beat, but the bars are stretched so it throws off the flow ,you gotta cut that out pimp. Still a solid track, some funny bars, i liked the intro, just fix the stretched bars.
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if you want, 2mrw when i get from church, i will go through the track and pick out every stretched bar just so you can see what im saying, you have talent, and mad cadence, but the stretched bars are the only thing hurting you, and the uncomfortable pauses. other than that , you have mad potential.. 100
Last edited by Erupt da Monsta; 02-09-2013 at 04:12 PM.
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