[J u s T C]

Havent listened yet but this thread is killing me lol. I'll take a listen and drop you some feed.

---------- Post added at 09:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:53 PM ----------

Not going to comment on the content but your delivery sounds hollow. your vocals dont hit because your delivery speeds up at odd points (rushed) and you have no cadence. your pauses sound long winded and awkward rather than confident and assured to make your message hit, some shaky doubles in there dont help either. I think the hook woulda been straight had it not been so hollow and had the right effects.

---------- Post added at 10:02 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:59 PM ----------

Work on your breath control. Also I think Proxen is saying the same about the multi's as I was about your awkward pacing suddenly jumping to this split second double time. It's to catch up and make your multi's fit. you need to edit those sections before you go to record.

[J u s T C]

Havent listened yet but this thread is killing me lol. I'll take a listen and drop you some feed.

---------- Post added at 09:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:53 PM ----------

Not going to comment on the content but your delivery sounds hollow. your vocals dont hit because your delivery speeds up at odd points (rushed) and you have no cadence. your pauses sound long winded and awkward rather than confident and assured to make your message hit, some shaky doubles in there dont help either. I think the hook woulda been straight had it not been so hollow and had the right effects.

---------- Post added at 10:02 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:59 PM ----------

Work on your breath control. Also I think Proxen is saying the same about the multi's as I was about your awkward pacing suddenly jumping to this split second double time. It's to catch up and make your multi's fit. you need to edit those sections before you go to record.