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Unread 09-04-2012, 06:38 AM
lsat97
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This is my first attempt at actually trying to put some verse together. This is only a short start, but I'd like some feedback to see if I'm sort of on the right track or if this completely wack lol.

Lyrically beast, I flow venom
MC's, can't match, my momentum,
As I go in on, 'em beats
all black, coup deville and
behind the wheel bitch it's me
Supa villain, flow be ill when
I be high of them trees
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Default some input please...

This is my first attempt at actually trying to put some verse together. This is only a short start, but I'd like some feedback to see if I'm sort of on the right track or if this completely wack lol.

Lyrically beast, I flow venom
MC's, can't match, my momentum,
As I go in on, 'em beats
all black, coup deville and
behind the wheel bitch it's me
Supa villain, flow be ill when
I be high of them trees
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