OSKAR Voted: kartoondmv: 4 / buc without the k: 1
JOSH™ Voted: kartoondmv: 3 / buc without the k: 1
ok, this one both ratings were about on par wit what i wouldve gave, oskar, you were to the point, kept the vote short as usual, but at least you gave the battler somethin to refer to to help him.. although it still would be counter productive if they dont know what to look for in a better verse. i did like the fact you pointed out about the battler talkin bout himself which is a waste of bars.. . josh, your was pretty similar to oskar, but you went slightly more in depth with syllable counts etc.. you also made the same mistake imo , to refer the battler to someone elses verses under the assumption that they would know what to look for... both were about equal this time around, but im edging this one to oskar, because he pointed out a few more elements that needed corrections. my vote oskar
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