round 2 voting critique:
Xplissit Voted: Ilovehoochies: 2 / ENGINEER: 3
JOSH™ Voted: Ilovehoochies: 2 / ENGINEER: 4
okay first off, this was fairly easy to determine, xplissit- you dropped a long breakdown, which imo, was unnecessary considering both of their verses, it was fairly cut and dry, in regards to what was wrong, and you didnt need to go wit a bar by bar breakdown, and when you did, you mainly described what you felt was wrong wit their lines.. the only problem is you didnt go further as to why you felt some bars were choppy or etc. etc.. you need to remember if their noobish, they wont understand where your coming from or what your idea of a good verse should be, so a good vote would include at least one ex. of the problem and solution.. josh- your breakdown was a bit long as well ,but much better in terms of good advice, with examples for the battlers to feed off of..
my vote goes to josh..
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