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Unread 08-12-2012, 02:03 PM
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Iunno, if I'm being honest, your flow is sort of hit and miss. don't really care for the hook, either. Or the adlib you did with the sex rocks line.

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Cory Kapono is right, though. I AM a nerd.

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Iunno, if I'm being honest, your flow is sort of hit and miss. don't really care for the hook, either. Or the adlib you did with the sex rocks line.

Edit:
Cory Kapono is right, though. I AM a nerd.

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