Wigsplits vote counts
Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Dono - Slightly more interesting and held attention.
Vocabulary - Dono - Nice use of vocal, Black-Book was slightly too repetitive.
Topic/Meaning - Tie - Different angles, quite creative from both.
Storytelling/Progression - Dono - No room to get lost, got to the point faster and held attention.
Emotion - Tie - Not a clear winner here.
Imagery - Black-Book - Clearer imagery.
Poetic Techniques - Tie - Niether used a technique that stood out enough, Book used repetition but IMO, not in the correct way.
Ending - Dono - Book; I don't think your ending worked out as well as you may have thought, I know you could have done better.
MVGT - Dono - Short and sweet, didn't drag, didn't go off track, nice concept that was executed well. Black-Book you were more creative, but I think there were too many flaws and too much repetition to get you the win on this one. Good battle.
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