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Originally Posted by Ill Phenom
This Kid NEXT TO ME WITH A HABIT that "Carries While He Talks" BREATHLESSLY WITH THE BAGGAGE that'll "Stick E On Ya Tongue" while your in EXTASY WITH A FAGGOT
It's not polished or fixed up.. But Just get an idea of what you want first and then polish it, Change multi's and shit from there..
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Then you just change your wording a little until is sounds more fluent. Like i'd prolly change the Two That's so it's not as repetitive with a single word in one line.
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got it..........does rhyme scheme play a part??