Yeah. The paper thing isn't a good look. Just read that shit untill it's embedded in your brain. Not only will it look better but it will help your delivery cadence presence and confidence. Everything.
Right now you sound too hesitant and throaty. I can hear your voice cracking which sounds like you lack confidence. That might not be the case but people associate that with a lack of confidence. And if you don't believe in what your saying. How can you expect the listener to?
Get me?
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