Was gonna save this for a PM but fuck it. It can go here.
Everything you said was true, and I didn't expect Killz to do that. What I expected him to do was have three stressed syllables, with anything he wanted before them. Instead, he used four syllables.. stressed the first and the last only, and left the middle two unstressed. That's just a plain ass 4-syllable multi.. slanting the second and third syllables (which, as far as scheming goes, is a weak 4-syllable multi), so dude, you're only rhyming two syllables. I re-read your verse to try to find a consistent 3-syllable scheme.. but there wasn't one. Your verse was fuckin solid, don't get me wrong. And verse for verse, yeah you bodied Savage. But as far as 3-syllable schemes go, Savage outclassed you.
And this isn't a bitching and moaning post.. it's more of a: I know Killz will get votes regardless of what he posts, just because people like him.. but the rules weren't followed.
Bending rules is cool if you can do it correctly. Shitting on them and lying isn't.
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