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Unread 03-20-2012, 09:23 AM
NelSyn
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Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Catharsis started strong w/ a nice opening line & stayed consistant afterwards.

Vocabulary: Catharsis had the more efficient vocab, it really brought his verse to a new level.

Topic/Meaning: FAME stayed on topic well & described the scenery really well.

Storytelling/Progression: TIE Too close to call.
Emotion: Catharsis had much more build to his emotion.

Imagery: FAME put a much better & clearer picture about the time frame, in my head.

Poetic Techniques: TIE both had amazing use of all poetic techniques.

Ending: Catharsis had the more clever ending. TBH, that's how he won this category. Oh & enjoyment while reading this line.

MVGT- Catharsis. He had a much more efficient verse, although he didn't win all the categories, he still won the important ones, over FAME...
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Unread 03-20-2012, 09:23 AM   #13
 
NelSyn
Estimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.93/10 stars
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44 Won / 24 Lost
 
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Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Catharsis started strong w/ a nice opening line & stayed consistant afterwards.

Vocabulary: Catharsis had the more efficient vocab, it really brought his verse to a new level.

Topic/Meaning: FAME stayed on topic well & described the scenery really well.

Storytelling/Progression: TIE Too close to call.
Emotion: Catharsis had much more build to his emotion.

Imagery: FAME put a much better & clearer picture about the time frame, in my head.

Poetic Techniques: TIE both had amazing use of all poetic techniques.

Ending: Catharsis had the more clever ending. TBH, that's how he won this category. Oh & enjoyment while reading this line.

MVGT- Catharsis. He had a much more efficient verse, although he didn't win all the categories, he still won the important ones, over FAME...
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