Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Erupt
Vocabulary - Erupt (Close)
Topic/Meaning - Erupt
Storytelling/Progression - Erupt
Emotion - Erupt
Imagery - Close
Poetic Techniques - Erupt
Ending - Erupt
I think Erupt pretty much nailed the concept. Fiji was dope, but i just followed one more and felt it. Fair.
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Originally Posted by Jason
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