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Unread 02-27-2012, 11:00 AM
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My 2pence:

BOTH your punches were shitty by vet standards.

‘split Artist in two’ like a FUCKING DUET!!

The wording of the punch itself was terrible, and was just basic nameplay. Im sure if someone looked you'd find this concept used against UA a few times before.

only "Blow me through the wall" at a GLORY HOLE!

Again the wording of the punch was very simplistic, and ive heard similar before from daddio and another im sure.

Obviously builds come into play and UA's wording made his a bit smoother as a whole.

Im not really sure what the issue is tho V, two basic bars, coin flip for the winner situation.

I dont think either bit, i think you both dropped your standard and UA being the vet that he is was saved by the overall polish of his writing. V didnt because the flow and wording werent as strong.

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Unread 02-27-2012, 11:00 AM   #8
 
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My 2pence:

BOTH your punches were shitty by vet standards.

‘split Artist in two’ like a FUCKING DUET!!

The wording of the punch itself was terrible, and was just basic nameplay. Im sure if someone looked you'd find this concept used against UA a few times before.

only "Blow me through the wall" at a GLORY HOLE!

Again the wording of the punch was very simplistic, and ive heard similar before from daddio and another im sure.

Obviously builds come into play and UA's wording made his a bit smoother as a whole.

Im not really sure what the issue is tho V, two basic bars, coin flip for the winner situation.

I dont think either bit, i think you both dropped your standard and UA being the vet that he is was saved by the overall polish of his writing. V didnt because the flow and wording werent as strong.

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