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**Prose_** · #6 02-20-2012, 08:22 AM

@remarK I meant add a story to it, throw some decent metaphors in there, maybe some better rhyme scheme. Use actual technique and it won't
Matter what talkin about but how u do it. *Alabama bumpkin voice* but it's so hard and compah-macaded.

**Prose_** · 02-20-2012, 08:22 AM

@remarK I meant add a story to it, throw some decent metaphors in there, maybe some better rhyme scheme. Use actual technique and it won't
Matter what talkin about but how u do it. *Alabama bumpkin voice* but it's so hard and compah-macaded.

02-20-2012, 08:22 AM	#6
Prose_ Ranked Text Record 93 Won / 67 Lost Join Date: Oct 2010 Voted: 0 audio / 664 text Posts: 1,672 Mentioned: 118 Post(s) Tagged: 4 Thread(s)	@remarK I meant add a story to it, throw some decent metaphors in there, maybe some better rhyme scheme. Use actual technique and it won't Matter what talkin about but how u do it. Alabama bumpkin voice but it's so hard and compah-macaded.
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