Hmmm. I think I understand what you mean, @Just C

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@King Speech have a listen, tell me what you think.

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Originally Posted by Jack-0-Lantern

http://hulkshare.com/e72viiqhrp6g

This is an old verse that I re-recorded, and a new second verse that i've added.

Check this out, guys. Feed back/criticism.

Hmmm. I think I understand what you mean, @Just C

---------- Post added at 04:29 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:15 PM ----------

@King Speech have a listen, tell me what you think.

---------- Post added at 04:30 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:29 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Jack-0-Lantern

http://hulkshare.com/e72viiqhrp6g

This is an old verse that I re-recorded, and a new second verse that i've added.

Check this out, guys. Feed back/criticism.