[Phroxen]

@God-Himself My longest scheme was 500 syllables.. that's why the entire top verse rhymes exactly with the entire bottom verse.. every syllable.. all 500. That's all it was, trying to make the longest multi with the best verse possible. Yeah your verse has some nice multies, but they're 11ish syllables like you said, and only rhyme on a few emphasized syllables.. they don't match word for word.. it's still impressive, yes. But if you're flaunting multies, you should rhyme more of the syllables in it.

Example:

Originally Posted by God-Himself

plane & it banged into buildings.. shit, Call me Hussein if I fit the description

The words in red aren't close to rhyming in that 8-syllable scheme, when they should if you're bragging about long schemes. Whereas my multi is a 500-syllable verse... that rhymes with another 500-syllable verse. So, I thought that was impressive.

[Phroxen]

@God-Himself My longest scheme was 500 syllables.. that's why the entire top verse rhymes exactly with the entire bottom verse.. every syllable.. all 500. That's all it was, trying to make the longest multi with the best verse possible. Yeah your verse has some nice multies, but they're 11ish syllables like you said, and only rhyme on a few emphasized syllables.. they don't match word for word.. it's still impressive, yes. But if you're flaunting multies, you should rhyme more of the syllables in it.

Example:

Originally Posted by God-Himself

plane & it banged into buildings.. shit, Call me Hussein if I fit the description

The words in red aren't close to rhyming in that 8-syllable scheme, when they should if you're bragging about long schemes. Whereas my multi is a 500-syllable verse... that rhymes with another 500-syllable verse. So, I thought that was impressive.