i always pitch this idea and everyone says "yea yea yea" but no one ever does it.
Stop trying to impress people with your lyrics and start trying to entertain them. imma tell you right now, reading your battles is fucking BORING. each and everyone one of you. you. you you. YES, YOU. check your verse for fluidity, narrative presence, original rhyme patters, punchlines, humor, effectiveness, then finally very last of all if at all syllable structure
try that out
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