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Originally Posted by DEADICATION
Smfh @ Phroxen ... Do u know what slant rhyming is? EVERY FUCKING RAPPER DOES THAT name at least ONE rapper that doesn't do slant rhyming |
Assuming you were defending Pronto_Banks, you're a moron. I don't care if he used slant rhyme or not.. I'm talking about the fucking syllables not matching. So either you're saying they match and you're a moron, or you're saying they don't match and you're proving my point.
And my vote?
You mean this one where I voted for you?
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Originally Posted by Phroxen
Deadication: Nice multies through the whole verse.. the estrogen punch was the hardest in your verse, and the setup was solid too. The last bar seemed a little forced with the rhyme scheme, but the punch did connect in the end. Decent drop.
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Or this one where I voted against you?
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Originally Posted by Phroxen
The other verse had tons of mismatched multies.. and if they matched, they were forced as hell. When they're being forced that badly, you may as well not even use them.. it just fucks up the entire bar. This verse also had several disappointing punches. So, since the punches in both verses were either played, forced, or took way too long to deliver, I'll call them a tie. The winner gets this with a more fluid read (you can call it flow if you want), clearer setups and more relevant and up to date material.
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Because one of those verses sucked. So, I'm cocky because I found flaws in your verse? You're not perfect, kid. You fuck outta here.