Pew, Pew, Pew [This The Sound Of Futuristic Laser Guns]
Is This Why You Call Yourself Dono Now Instead Of Dono The God?
Because God Has Died And Humans Have Outgrown You?
Started Off Well, Pretty Well Actually... Liked The Part About Invention Of All Cars That Was Coolio... In The Middle I Kinda Thought... This Is Getting Boring And Predictable... And In The End I Was Disappointed Because You Started Degrading The Readers With The Fact That You Are God (Wow What A Revelation)...And Then You Made It Sound Like You Were Not God... Just Gay... The Ending That Is... Started Off Really Good... Got Soso In The Middle And Ended... ... ...
Anywho,
Rhyming Scheme/Flow 7
Vocabulary 6
Topic/Meaning 7
Storytelling/Progression 8
Emotion 4
Poetic Techniques 6
Ending 3
That Makes It.. Uh... One Second... 41... I Think
Subliminal123... Yay... Still Dont Know Your Sex... Anywho...
This Is All Very Iam Legend Ish... Not Necessarily Saying Its A Bad Thing... Hmmm
You Went Well With The Emotion And Storytelling; Sadly Your Overall Presentation Was Lackluster; Does Vocabulary Include Correct Grammar? Because If It Does... ... Anywho
Lets Get Straight To The Votes... Before That Uh Vivid Stuff I Guess
Rhyming Scheme/Flow 6
Vocabulary 5
Topic/Meaning 6
Storytelling/Progression 7
Emotion 7
Poetic Techniques 6
Ending 4
Why Is There No Voting For Overall Presentation? Ugh... 41...
Same Score
However, I Liked Donos Overall Presentation More So DONO WINS In My Eyes
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Originally Posted by Student
Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT
you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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Originally Posted by Edgeworth
Ok so at this point you guys are just being willfully ignorant / not understanding on purpose / or just trolling.
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"Little 4 To 5"? Need To Be "Hand Held"? My "Style" Is Modish Than Basic, I Kid, Joint Clips Follow My "Touch" Like "Co-vid" App Tracing - Lizman Vs MarkThePatriarch
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