AfterThought
Rhyme Scheme - 3.5/10
Was really lost at some parts in your verse, nothing too special about this.
Poetic Techniques - 6/10
You did paint the picture nicely & made it work, the rhyme issue could've made it better though.
Significance - 5/10
Generous rate, could've perfected some parts.
Vocabulary - 2/10
Vocabulary was really basic tbh, the level of grammar you use is a very effective factor in topicals.
Emotion - 5/10
Kind of managed to show it.
Imagery - 5/10
You kind of started moving the picture for me.
Storytelling - 3/10
Try making the lines more relevant to each other
Ending - 6/10
I actually think you did it pretty well, I liked it.
Final score - 35.5/80
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