Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Felt one was stronger here - Dono.
Vocabulary: Neither flexed really hard here. If forced to pick i'd say this dude mighta edged it... Dono.
Topic/Meaning: I think Uncle Wiggles took this cat - Wiggles.
Storytelling/Progression: I thought Dono's middle section was really strong, but overall that Wiggles did better over the whole - Wiggles.
Emotion: Felt like neither really got to where they needed to go. I finished both piece feeling like it had been rushed or that it needed more. There was a couple cliched lines from each side. - TIE.
Imagery: One told a more vivid story - Wiggles.
Poetic Techniques: Honestly felt Wiggles pushed the envelope further as far as techniques and execution went. - Wiggles.
Ending: Donos felt unfinished, not sure if u were keying to meet the deadline or summat but Wiggles got this cat - Wiggles.
MVGT: Both had nice drops, Donos felt incomplete and had a few too many cliches spots, Wiggles was more entertaining throughout. - Wiggles.
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